The angle of the split on the page is fabulous. Great pictures to show case. The bw effect is perfect on the bigger picture and the clustering on the frame looks wonderful.
Fun photos and great journaling! I love how you placed it on a postcard. I've been to the Sutro baths before and the kids had a blast exploring everywhere.
I like your journaling and fun wordy bits, and how you've got the harder edged feel on the black and white section and the softer, more swirly/girly stuff in the coloured section.