Love your layout and the interesting photo treatment. Excellent use of the kit elements and papers, especially the journal cards. Fun title work, too, tho I'm wondering what happened to the 2nd "L" in "ROLL". Your clusters look great tucked in here and there ... Love the blue polkadot clothes pin!
The buttoned down banner with the large flowing title at the edge is fantastic for your page (but an L dropped like MsKinsey said). The journal card tucked in with the clustering is wonderful.