I suspect you may have a way too large version of the layout here as I can't even make it fit in my computer screen. LOL. Thus I can only say that I seem to recall liking your layout when I saw it smaller in the gallery. LOL LOL
Love your "Big Island" double pager ... It kind of took me back for a moment because St. Croix in the US Virgin Islands is also known as the "big island"! Compared with Hawaii, however, we're teensy. Your photos are gorgeous, and the entire layout altogether is absolutely marvelous!