The large photo of the beach is fantastic. The insets of the kids is a great accent. Love the color palette you chose. The waves on the lower paper mimics waves on the ocean wonderfully.
What a fabulous rock formation! Gotta love igneous rock ... it has real staying power. LoL! I like the page-width photo of the beach and Haystack Rock, as well as the near-perfect triangle formed by the photo cluster at the bottom and the small clusters on either side of the title.