I am glad to see they still do these types of milestone graduations. They don't in my school district but I fondly remember my own eighth grade graduation. I like the way you fit "Fifth Grade" into the space between the photos and the way the photo and element grouping forms a great header for the journaling area below.
I like the way you matting the journaling on the dark red paper it makes a great frame. I also like the way the pictures go across the top of the journaling.